Dream Deep

Argh. I hate this opening for Chapter 5. It feels cumbersome, heavy, doesn't flow. I'm open to all and any suggestions at this point. ^_~ Shan watched her wash the ...

The Brothers Karamazon by Fyodor Dostoyevsky. Totally awesome... ^_^ Ooh! Or Ward No. 6 by Anton Chekhov... one of the most brilliant short stories I've read in a long time. ...

*gets up* What, you don't think it's magical? *Livny smites Pros* Lol, and that's all there is to say about that ! :cool: Worship me, I have Kasimovs.

Why refrain? It's magical!! ^_^ *runs in circles and falls over*

Aw, I feel sorry for you, Crysi. I sacrificed Chapter 4 of the Chair to computer heaven not too long ago, stupid electrical outage... -_-

Lol, description's not evil, it's merely... *gestures, searching for word* ..merely... exceedingly difficult to write properly. But maybe it's evil because it's so hard to avoid being wordy and diffic

*similarly... flinches* Argh, I don't like 'bearish'. Lol, you could always change 'gave him a big bearish hug instead' to something nice and simple and easy to follow like 'embraced ...

Lol, I was just going to ask you the same thing.... ^_~ *bows with a flourish* The honor would be mine, Wiggy. :wink:

Hehe, I would take your money... Muahahaha. :twisted: Or you could do what I do: no time on YWS until I get something written. And because I'm hopelessly addicted to ...

Actually, and this is going to sound really idiotic, Wiggy, but I keep a piece of paper and a pen on me always. And when I'm watching a movie or ...

Lol, maybe I'll go after Wiggy... This haiku torture has to count for something. ^_~

Hmmm. That's sort of a tricky question. ^_~ But here's the best I can do for you: :wink: You want each scene (or chapter) to be like it's own mini ...

I have to agree with Snoink on that one... Good idea, by the way, herkeyboard... ^_~

I find that on a lot of my stories, it helps to have an object I associate with the main character, situation, plot, etc. or whatever with me while I'm ...

The fundamental concept of E-Prime is to write without ever once using and conjugation of the verb to-be. And though this taks a little bit of effort, finding substitues for ...